loose tea leaves
overflow the scoop
autumn evening
—Donna Kaplan
I love loose tea without the paper/plasticness of teabags after-taste spoiling things. Favourite loose tea, big leaves, not the 'powder stuff' is Earl Grey, and Rose tea, as both kinds have beautiful flowers in amongst the leaves.
I also like to look at first words on each line.
e.g.
loose
overflow
autumn
And last words:
leaves
scoop
evening
As sometimes there's another haiku within the haiku!
I love loose tea without the paper/plasticness of teabags after-taste spoiling things. Favourite loose tea, big leaves, not the 'powder stuff' is Earl Grey, and Rose tea, as both kinds have beautiful flowers in amongst the leaves.
I also like to look at first words on each line.
e.g.
loose
overflow
autumn
And last words:
leaves
scoop
evening
As sometimes there's another haiku within the haiku!
August 7th, 2023 at 10:43 am
Second attempt to post:
loose tea leaves
overflow the scoop
autumn evening
—Donna Kaplan
I love loose tea without the paper/plasticness of teabags after-taste spoiling things. Favourite loose tea, big leaves, not the 'powder stuff' is Earl Grey, and Rose tea, as both kinds have beautiful flowers in amongst the leaves.
I also like to look at first words on each line.
e.g.
loose
overflow
autumn
And last words:
leaves
scoop
evening
As sometimes there's another haiku within the haiku!
August 8th, 2023 at 6:43 am
I love loose tea without the paper/plasticness of teabags after-taste spoiling things. Favourite loose tea, big leaves, not the 'powder stuff' is Earl Grey, and Rose tea, as both kinds have beautiful flowers in amongst the leaves.
I also like to look at first words on each line.
e.g.
loose
overflow
autumn
And last words:
leaves
scoop
evening
As sometimes there's another haiku within the haiku!