caws becoming specks becoming crows
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Brad Bennett
Brad Bennett has published three collections of haiku with Red Moon Press, a drop of pond (2016),a turn in the river (2019), and a box of feathers (2022). a drop of pond won a Touchstone Distinguished Book Award from the Haiku Foundation. View all posts by Brad Bennett
Yes. that is exactly how I read your poem!
Good use of repetition in this. Well captured.
marion
the mind picture! I’ve written very few haiku, but appreciate well-expressed ones.