caws becoming specks becoming crows
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Brad Bennett
Brad Bennett has published four collections of haiku with Red Moon Press: a drop of pond, a turn in the river, a box of feathers, and a rush of doves. He is also the author of a few words in the right order: essays on haiku craft, also published by Red Moon Press. View all posts by Brad Bennett
Yes. that is exactly how I read your poem!
Good use of repetition in this. Well captured.
marion
the mind picture! I’ve written very few haiku, but appreciate well-expressed ones.