kite string the hum of the wind in?my hand
—Garry Eaton
Issue 14.1 | 26 June 2014
Oh, nice! You've given me the whole experience. :)
Beautiful!
Marvellous sensuousness in this haiku! I love how the third line works as an ending for both the second line and the first line. Wonderful.
Marvelous! Great sensory impact. Thanks for sharing this.
Thanks all for your appreciative comments. Most gratifying.
kite string the hum of the wind in my hand
—GARRY EATON
Always a well-written haiku from Mr Eaton.
I like the turnarounds in senses.
warm regards, Alan
This is great – I could relate to it immediately :)
marion
Wonderful!
Really appreciate all the positive feedback. It feels like a kite string in my mind!
Garry
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June 26th, 2014 at 3:27 pm
Oh, nice! You've given me the whole experience. :)
June 26th, 2014 at 3:59 pm
Beautiful!
June 27th, 2014 at 6:34 am
Marvellous sensuousness in this haiku! I love how the third line works as an ending for both the second line and the first line. Wonderful.
June 26th, 2014 at 4:44 pm
Marvelous! Great sensory impact. Thanks for sharing this.
June 27th, 2014 at 9:02 am
Thanks all for your appreciative comments. Most gratifying.
June 30th, 2014 at 8:13 am
kite string
the hum of the wind
in my hand
—GARRY EATON
Always a well-written haiku from Mr Eaton.
I like the turnarounds in senses.
warm regards,
Alan
July 1st, 2014 at 3:58 pm
This is great – I could relate to it immediately :)
marion
July 15th, 2014 at 6:52 am
Wonderful!
December 16th, 2014 at 4:40 am
Really appreciate all the positive feedback. It feels like a kite string in my mind!
Garry