Garry Eaton is a retired, jack-of-all-trades Canadian on the west coast of British Columbia. He has been practicing haiku since 2006. He is interested in the way the discipline is refocusing his attention on, and improving his appreciation of the gift of life.
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Oh, nice! You've given me the whole experience. :)
Oh, nice! You've given me the whole experience. :)
Beautiful!
Marvellous sensuousness in this haiku! I love how the third line works as an ending for both the second line and the first line. Wonderful.
Marvelous! Great sensory impact. Thanks for sharing this.
Thanks all for your appreciative comments. Most gratifying.
kite string
the hum of the wind
in my hand
—GARRY EATON
Always a well-written haiku from Mr Eaton.
I like the turnarounds in senses.
warm regards,
Alan
This is great – I could relate to it immediately :)
marion
Wonderful!
Really appreciate all the positive feedback. It feels like a kite string in my mind!
Garry