I am reminded of a similar line, which Blanche Dubois delivers in 'Streetcar': 'I rely on the kindness of strangers.' Your haiku seems to play off of that nicely.
I also thought of one of my own (naturally!):
veteran nurse
I feel her warmth
in the cold thermometer
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When so very young.
Now aged peace.
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I also thought of one of my own (naturally!):
veteran nurse
I feel her warmth
in the cold thermometer
May 20th, 2016 at 2:56 pm
burnt out sticks
briefly lit, then cold, cold.
the match stick girl
May 20th, 2016 at 7:42 pm
Morning clouds flushed with pink
An eruption of white cockatoos
Wheeling, squawking.
The river wakes up….
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night falls
cat eyes illumine the page
curling up
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the bedroom
several shades brighter
snow dawn
(The Mainichi Daily News, 19th January, 2012)
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sunlight
inches
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bedroom
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(Tinywords, February 4, 2004)
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