a river’s song darkness settles first in its stones
—Sandi Pray
Issue 16.1 | 24 March 2016
As many of us know it's unusual to find a haiku by Sandi that is not accompanied by some amazing artwork.
So this is a grand opportunity to just see how powerful her haiku stands alone:
—SANDI PRAY
Wonderful haiku!
warm regards,
Alan
Sandy, So happy to see your good works here also! I feel you are working very hard on your haiku and I wanted you to know it shows! Thanks for seeing this and writing this haiku.
o/ Jane
The character River Song in the British science fiction series "Dr. Who" immediately came into my mind as I read the first line.
Same here! :)
Lovely, thought provoking.
Thank you for this beautiful haiku.
Beautiful image, Sandi. Thank you!
I love the image of darkness settling first in the river's stones, Sandi. Beautiful.
marion
A very beautiful haiku, Sandi.
Great!!
beautiful. Night turns the stones dark. But the river bubbles along, singing its song, holding onto, and reflecting back the light.
I am just finding these wonderful comments! I am so honored by your words <3
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March 24th, 2016 at 9:49 am
As many of us know it's unusual to find a haiku by Sandi that is not accompanied by some amazing artwork.
So this is a grand opportunity to just see how powerful her haiku stands alone:
a river’s song
darkness settles first
in its stones
—SANDI PRAY
Wonderful haiku!
warm regards,
Alan
March 24th, 2016 at 9:50 am
Sandy,
So happy to see your good works here also! I feel you are working very hard on your haiku and I wanted you to know it shows! Thanks for seeing this and writing this haiku.
o/ Jane
March 24th, 2016 at 11:38 am
The character River Song in the British science fiction series "Dr. Who" immediately came into my mind as I read the first line.
March 24th, 2016 at 2:10 pm
Same here! :)
March 24th, 2016 at 11:49 am
Lovely, thought provoking.
March 24th, 2016 at 12:04 pm
Thank you for this beautiful haiku.
March 24th, 2016 at 2:03 pm
Beautiful image, Sandi. Thank you!
March 29th, 2016 at 3:49 am
I love the image of darkness settling first in the river's stones, Sandi. Beautiful.
marion
April 4th, 2016 at 9:47 am
A very beautiful haiku, Sandi.
May 26th, 2016 at 12:07 pm
Great!!
May 28th, 2016 at 9:06 am
beautiful.
Night turns the stones dark. But the river bubbles along, singing its song, holding onto, and reflecting back the light.
February 1st, 2017 at 6:31 pm
I am just finding these wonderful comments! I am so honored by your words <3