thick dust the life we lived in other rooms
—David J. Kelly
Issue 16.2 | 5 October 2016
Lovely suggestions in the phrase 'other rooms'.
I like imagining what the dust holds–it would depend on the room. Very nice, David.
Yes, so many possibilities in 'other rooms'. Love rereading this one.
dusting – the memory of each thing I don't own
There is a whole back story suggested in these lines. I really like this.
marion
I very much enjoyed reading your work. It prompted:
sharing space in the rooms of my mind dusty memories
Janet
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October 5th, 2016 at 9:06 am
Lovely suggestions in the phrase 'other rooms'.
October 5th, 2016 at 3:39 pm
I like imagining what the dust holds–it would depend on the room. Very nice, David.
October 5th, 2016 at 4:25 pm
Yes, so many possibilities in 'other rooms'. Love rereading this one.
dusting – the memory of each thing I don't own
October 11th, 2016 at 9:43 am
There is a whole back story suggested in these lines. I really like this.
marion
October 18th, 2016 at 10:25 am
I very much enjoyed reading your work. It prompted:
sharing space
in the rooms of my mind
dusty memories
Janet