thick dust
the life we lived
in other rooms

5 Responses

  1. Lynne Rees Says:

    Lovely suggestions in the phrase 'other rooms'.

  2. MaryJo Says:

    I like imagining what the dust holds–it would depend on the room. Very nice, David.

  3. janewilliams Says:

    Yes, so many possibilities in 'other rooms'. Love rereading this one.

    dusting – the memory of each thing I don't own

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    There is a whole back story suggested in these lines. I really like this.


  5. Janet Qually Says:

    I very much enjoyed reading your work. It prompted:

    sharing space
    in the rooms of my mind
    dusty memories


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