doomsday clock the scent of rain before the rain
—dl mattila
Issue 17.1 | 10 April 2017
__ As this was intended to do for all, I believe, you've energized a contrary thought in my sallow mind; 'flower clock.' _m
Love the tension in this.
marion
A dark but elegant haiku, with multiple levels of meaning. Excellent work!
Nice work. It's unfortunate that this is more resonant these days.
Everything is going to change from what it was to what it will be Change is inevitable However the perfect moment is not far away.
beautiful.
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April 10th, 2017 at 9:09 am
__ As this was intended to do for all, I believe, you've energized a contrary thought in my sallow mind; 'flower clock.'
_m
April 10th, 2017 at 10:05 am
Love the tension in this.
marion
April 10th, 2017 at 7:02 pm
A dark but elegant haiku, with multiple levels of meaning. Excellent work!
April 11th, 2017 at 9:52 am
Nice work. It's unfortunate that this is more resonant these days.
April 14th, 2017 at 8:24 pm
Everything is going to change from what it was to what it will be
Change is inevitable
However the perfect moment is not far away.
December 17th, 2017 at 7:08 am
doomsday clock
the scent of rain
before the rain
beautiful.