Good use of touch – I could almost feel the pressure of that wind. I like how this is a narrative that is open to interpretation: Does the narrator strive to leave, to return home perhaps, or is she/he fearful of being dropped by the person they address?
arms wide
I lean against the wind
that blows across the atlantic
how long
before you let me go?
—CLAIRE ROSILDA NORMAN
Ah the wind and the rain are not always the only things pushing and pulling us are they? It can be indecisions, or other people in general, or one in particular, from a parent to a lover. Great visual, and intriguing concluding two lines.
November 13th, 2017 at 9:28 pm
afternoon waves~~~
the falling sun
shadows the sand
November 14th, 2017 at 3:52 am
Good use of touch – I could almost feel the pressure of that wind. I like how this is a narrative that is open to interpretation: Does the narrator strive to leave, to return home perhaps, or is she/he fearful of being dropped by the person they address?
marion
November 20th, 2017 at 2:32 pm
thanks for the thoughts :)
November 20th, 2017 at 3:40 am
arms wide
I lean against the wind
that blows across the atlantic
how long
before you let me go?
—CLAIRE ROSILDA NORMAN
Ah the wind and the rain are not always the only things pushing and pulling us are they? It can be indecisions, or other people in general, or one in particular, from a parent to a lover. Great visual, and intriguing concluding two lines.
warm regards from the South West (U.K.)
Alan
Call of the Page
November 20th, 2017 at 2:40 pm
thanks Alan :) You got it.