Very nice! Helen.
Having camped many times I can relate to this.
It also reminds me of Nick Virgilioso awesome poem.
lily
out of the water
out of itself
Dear Helen I feel a lovely touch of humor, subtle implication and positive feeling here… maybe planted in a bed…sesame sunflower left? Or psychological. And shaken could mean scattered and or cleared out…for a fresh start… but surely a renewal!
Thanks so much, Kath, for such a thoughtful and wide-ranging interpretation, and to Robert for comparing it to, as you rightly say, Nick's awesome poem!
October 9th, 2019 at 9:19 am
Very nice! Helen.
Having camped many times I can relate to this.
It also reminds me of Nick Virgilioso awesome poem.
lily
out of the water
out of itself
October 9th, 2019 at 9:19 am
Dear Helen I feel a lovely touch of humor, subtle implication and positive feeling here… maybe planted in a bed…sesame sunflower left? Or psychological. And shaken could mean scattered and or cleared out…for a fresh start… but surely a renewal!
October 9th, 2019 at 2:48 pm
Thanks so much, Kath, for such a thoughtful and wide-ranging interpretation, and to Robert for comparing it to, as you rightly say, Nick's awesome poem!
October 9th, 2019 at 2:53 pm
window pane
through this silence
a snowflake