this ragged rhythm
counting the beats per minute
late summer dusk

3 Responses

  1. MaryJo Says:

    This is so poignant and reminds me of my dad, being with him, counting the beats…

  2. martin1223 Says:

    the sun’s edge on the ice

  3. Kath Abela Wilson Says:

    Love this poem! The ragged rhythm of it. The first two lines are 5/7
    And then…4..! Just right.
    For the end af a raggedcsummer Beverly. A beauty.

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