all my rough edges smoothed out by salt air morning stroll
—Barbara Kaufmann
Issue 19.2 | 11 October 2019
Thank You for your haiga…
This ia a very good poem,
__ Your thoughts flow through this photo/senryu, and its haiga result stirs further imaginations. Nagy! _m
new thoughts teases these tidal toes each step
lots of synaesthesia, beautiful
Beautiful, Barbara
marion
Gorgeous words and image both. Perfectly rounded off with 'morning stroll' reminding me it's in the slowing down not the speeding up that real smoothness and softening takes place …
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October 11th, 2019 at 10:37 am
Thank You for your haiga…
October 11th, 2019 at 10:46 am
This ia a very good poem,
October 11th, 2019 at 1:30 pm
__ Your thoughts flow through this photo/senryu, and its haiga result stirs further imaginations. Nagy! _m
new thoughts
teases these tidal toes
each step
October 11th, 2019 at 2:07 pm
lots of synaesthesia, beautiful
October 12th, 2019 at 3:10 am
Beautiful, Barbara
marion
October 12th, 2019 at 6:33 pm
Gorgeous words and image both. Perfectly rounded off with 'morning stroll' reminding me it's in the slowing down not the speeding up that real smoothness and softening takes place …