all my rough edges
smoothed out by salt air
morning stroll
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Barbara Kaufmann
Barbra Kaufmann is a retired RN with lots of time for writing poetry, photography, gardening, walking and grandchildren!
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Gorgeous words and image both. Perfectly rounded off with 'morning stroll' reminding me it's in the slowing down not the speeding up that real smoothness and softening takes place …
Thank You for your haiga…
This ia a very good poem,
__ Your thoughts flow through this photo/senryu, and its haiga result stirs further imaginations. Nagy! _m
new thoughts
teases these tidal toes
each step
lots of synaesthesia, beautiful
Beautiful, Barbara
marion
Gorgeous words and image both. Perfectly rounded off with 'morning stroll' reminding me it's in the slowing down not the speeding up that real smoothness and softening takes place …