if only I could awake in the arms of the northern lights … dancing, dancing
—Susan Constable
Issue 21.1 | 4 June 2021
Susan, this image, so beautiful, makes me want to too!
Susan, what a great image. Even the sound of the words seems to dance. Thank you!
Great use of repetition, Susan. A fine tanka.
marion
Go ahead and dance, Nancy! I'm happy this haiku makes you feel that way.
Thank you, Martin. I'm glad the words seem to dance for you.
Nice to know the repetition works for you, Marion. Thanks for the comment.
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June 4th, 2021 at 4:43 pm
Susan, this image, so beautiful, makes me want to too!
June 5th, 2021 at 1:48 pm
Susan, what a great image. Even the sound of the words seems to dance. Thank you!
June 7th, 2021 at 11:47 pm
Great use of repetition, Susan. A fine tanka.
marion
June 8th, 2021 at 2:52 pm
Go ahead and dance, Nancy! I'm happy this haiku makes you feel that way.
Thank you, Martin. I'm glad the words seem to dance for you.
Nice to know the repetition works for you, Marion. Thanks for the comment.