if only
I could awake
in the arms
of the northern lights …
dancing, dancing
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Susan Constable
Susan Constable mainly writes haiku and tanka, receiving her inspiration from life on the west coast of Canada. Her work is widely published in both print and online journals, as well as in numerous anthologies. She has judged several contests as well as co-edited a couple of haiku and tanka anthologies She was the tanka editor for the online journal A Hundred Gourds from March 2012 to June 2016.
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Susan, this image, so beautiful, makes me want to too!
Susan, this image, so beautiful, makes me want to too!
Susan, what a great image. Even the sound of the words seems to dance. Thank you!
Great use of repetition, Susan. A fine tanka.
marion
Go ahead and dance, Nancy! I'm happy this haiku makes you feel that way.
Thank you, Martin. I'm glad the words seem to dance for you.
Nice to know the repetition works for you, Marion. Thanks for the comment.