it’s hot, it’s hot . . . the late-night complaints of banjo frogs
—Lorin Ford
Issue 21.1 | 23 June 2021
The "o"s at the beginning and end of the haiku make for a merry chorus. The image made me smile. I love the sensibility of this one!
Lorin, this is fun! L1 makes me think this is exactly how the frogs sound. We're into a heat wave here. But no frogs.
Beautifully captured, Lorin. There's so much rhythm here.
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June 23rd, 2021 at 9:37 am
The "o"s at the beginning and end of the haiku make for a merry chorus. The image made me smile. I love the sensibility of this one!
June 23rd, 2021 at 11:24 am
Lorin, this is fun! L1 makes me think this is exactly how the frogs sound. We're into a heat wave here. But no frogs.
June 23rd, 2021 at 2:17 pm
Beautifully captured, Lorin.
There's so much rhythm here.