it’s hot, it’s hot . . .
the late-night complaints
of banjo frogs

3 Responses

  1. Gaby Bedetti Says:

    The "o"s at the beginning and end of the haiku make for a merry chorus. The image made me smile. I love the sensibility of this one!

  2. Dan Curtis Says:

    Lorin, this is fun! L1 makes me think this is exactly how the frogs sound. We're into a heat wave here. But no frogs.

  3. kalaramesh Says:

    Beautifully captured, Lorin.
    There's so much rhythm here.

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