I like how this beautiful poem has layers. It could be an observation of the weather with a feeling of being either in a forest or perhaps even in town with the sounds of traffic, etc being muffled by the snow and yet… it speaks of emotions, of coldness, of distance and darkening.
Well done.
February 9th, 2010 at 9:31 am
I like how this beautiful poem has layers. It could be an observation of the weather with a feeling of being either in a forest or perhaps even in town with the sounds of traffic, etc being muffled by the snow and yet… it speaks of emotions, of coldness, of distance and darkening.
Well done.
February 9th, 2010 at 10:43 am
Represents to me of being alone during a cold period of ones life. Well written!
February 9th, 2010 at 1:25 pm
I like it.
February 9th, 2010 at 4:48 pm
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heavy snowfall –
a white silence
deepens
From 2005
http://happyhaiku.blogspot.com/2005/12/heavy-snowfall.html
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February 19th, 2010 at 6:32 pm
Gabi Greve takes the prize. Well done – an excellent use of kigo!
next morning
the snow was over
everything
^_^
February 26th, 2010 at 3:10 pm
What Carole said! This one keeps opening up and out. Lovely.
October 12th, 2010 at 6:50 pm
silence
snowflakes melt on the window
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