summer dusk
the call and response
of neighbors

 

5 Responses

  1. Tim Dwyer Says:

    lovely sound of words and images, a gentle warmth

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    Brilliant!

  3. Debbie Says:

    Really beautiful!

  4. darius s. Says:

    mouse, wet in cat spit, still alive.
    my black cat crosses the landing.
    new neighbor has a cat inside.
    new neighbor has put out
    a welcome mat,
    now with a spot of blood dropped by.

    stolen flower pot,
    great dirt left
    covering litter

  5. Janice Doppler Says:

    Such an evocative verse … the heat of the day cooling, parents calling it’s time to come inside and children begging for just five more minutes of playtime. I find myself starting this memory then drifting into more.

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