Slime trail— glancing back at the glinting
—Don Wentworth
Issue 11.3 | 19 December 2011
Cool.
g'day Don
I love this, so familiar to me
peace and love
I really like this, Don!
I have a slug trail haiku I never could get right, but then, I didn't think of "slime trail", lol! Makes me miss the west coast. Great one, Don. :)
Oh, My! Don … how our memories come through "glinting"… It's a good thing we can let all the slime fall away…Many thanks, Merrill
"Issa's Untidy Hut" truly, (and mt fuji slowly, slowly. Thank you, Don, for this gem.
Thanks all. I really appreciate the enthusiasm. Don
Good use of alliteration/consonance (g and gl). Another haiku with several layers for the close reader to be rewarded.
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December 19th, 2011 at 10:42 am
Cool.
December 19th, 2011 at 2:59 pm
g'day Don
I love this, so familiar to me
peace and love
December 19th, 2011 at 3:37 pm
I really like this, Don!
December 19th, 2011 at 4:40 pm
I have a slug trail haiku I never could get right, but then, I didn't think of "slime trail", lol! Makes me miss the west coast. Great one, Don. :)
December 19th, 2011 at 7:53 pm
Oh, My! Don … how our memories come through "glinting"… It's a good thing we can let all the slime fall away…Many thanks, Merrill
December 20th, 2011 at 9:02 am
"Issa's Untidy Hut" truly, (and mt fuji slowly, slowly. Thank you, Don, for this gem.
December 21st, 2011 at 9:41 am
Thanks all. I really appreciate the enthusiasm. Don
December 29th, 2011 at 3:34 am
Slime trail—
glancing back at
the glinting
—Don Wentworth
Good use of alliteration/consonance (g and gl). Another haiku with several layers for the close reader to be rewarded.
January 29th, 2012 at 4:28 am
[...] —Don Wentworth, Tinywords [...]