Slime trail—
glancing back at
the glinting
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Don Wentworth
Don Wentworth is a Pittsburgh-based poet whose work reflects his interest in the revelatory nature of brief, haiku-like moments in everyday life. His poetry has appeared in Modern Haiku, bottle rockets, bear creek haiku and Rolling Stone, as well as a number of anthologies. His first full-length collection, Past All Traps, was published in 2011 by Six Gallery Press and was shortlisted for the Haiku Foundation's 2011 Touchstone Distinguished Books Award. His second full-length book, Yield to the Willow, is forthcoming in 2013 from Six Gallery Press. View all posts by Don Wentworth
Cool.
g'day Don
I love this, so familiar to me
peace and love
I really like this, Don!
I have a slug trail haiku I never could get right, but then, I didn't think of "slime trail", lol! Makes me miss the west coast. Great one, Don. :)
Oh, My! Don … how our memories come through "glinting"… It's a good thing we can let all the slime fall away…Many thanks, Merrill
"Issa's Untidy Hut" truly, (and mt fuji slowly, slowly. Thank you, Don, for this gem.
Thanks all. I really appreciate the enthusiasm. Don
Slime trail—
glancing back at
the glinting
—Don Wentworth
Good use of alliteration/consonance (g and gl). Another haiku with several layers for the close reader to be rewarded.