tinted mirror
what I think
I believe


9 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Train bathroom mirrors and even more so those aircraft bathroom mirrors are brutally honest. Give me a tinted mirror anytime. :-)

    Alan

  2. Gene Murtha Says:

    lovely poem!

  3. Brandon Bordelon Says:

    reciting the Creed…
    my distorted reflection
    in the polished wood

  4. Jeffrey Winke Says:

    very cool…

  5. haikuapprentice Says:

    Wow, another haiku poem that raises and sets me pondering philosophical issues. Or should I say, "confronting" those issues. Because the "mirror" mentioned in the work confronts us all every day, with apparent certainty. Who am I? What face do I present to the world? And for that matter, what is "the world"? This is literally an "existential" haiku!

    This poem seems to deliberately set up an echo to Descartes' famous "Cogito ergo sum" – "I think therefore I am". For me, Lynne Rees appears to be challenging me to recognize that our other mirrors may also be "tinted". How do we know? What do we think? What do we believe about the world?

    What we "believe" about ourself, our appearance, we usually judge by means of a mirror – even though intellectually we "know" of course that everything is in reverse. So when shown a picture of ourself in a photograph we experience with something like shock the revelation of what we "really" look like.

    So for me, this poem is almost like a zen zazen, a challenge – and also a means – to balance our left and right brains. Our left hemisphere breaks reality into pieces – like shards of glass; it focuses on and manipulates "facts" and "data". The right hemisphere by contrast works to integrate these into wholes; into fully comprehensible pictures of reality. So which side of the mirror is real?

    This poem leaves me unsettled. There is no final answer. Like those parallel mirrors in which I see myself reflected endlessly into the distance, this poem, and these philosophical questions, recur endlessly. The writing and the reading, the poet and the reader, are the mirror images. Which side knows? Which side believes?

    Ah, wonderful!

    Strider

  6. Lynne Says:

    Thanks so much for the thoughtful commentary, Strider, A response like this is something every writer hopes for – but to have it articulated and shared is a bonus. I think it's always a risk to edge towards philosophy in such a short poem but perhaps I felt more comfortable in allowing this one to pass into the public gaze because it did arise from an actual experience/thought process. Again – I really appreciate you taking the time to explore the haiku. 'Ah, wonderful' back at you.
    Best wishes
    Lynne

  7. Jan Dobb Says:

    hall mirror
    the garden reversing
    inside

    Jan Dobb
    (paper wasp, 17.2. June 2011)

  8. Lynne Says:

    Thanks for the appreciation, everyone.
    L x

  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    This made me think of the expressions 'seeing the world through rose-tinted glasses' and also 'you are only as old as you feel'. Nice.

    marion

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