first night
in her bed
wild geese


5 Responses

  1. Ross Says:

    Sex can, indeed, be quite liberating. I really dig this poem.

  2. Rick Hartwell Says:

    Very evocative; imaginatively sensual. Great poem.

  3. Kathe L. Palka Says:

    Wild geese, although often migratory, generally mate for life. So I’m seeing more than a casual romance. Love the rich texture of this haiku. So much in so very few words.

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    first night
    in her bed
    wild geese

    —Jeff Hoagland

    In a natural history setting very romantic, or if meant as urban slang, something quite different. :-)

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Lovely.

    marion

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