deep autumn
all the tree tops
full of sky

9 Responses

  1. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    How lovely! I will look up today.

  2. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Nice visual.

  3. Kala Ramesh Says:

    Absolutely lovely, Ann!

  4. Isak Kempe Says:

    Great poem. Thank you.

  5. snakypoet Says:

    Oh yes, as others have already said —lovely!

  6. barbara a taylor Says:


  7. Jan Dobb Says:

    So beautiful, Ann. And I love the contrasts of deep and high, bare and full . . . Have put it in 'my favourites' collection.

    the sky falls to pieces
    in a gum tree

    (H.Commended, Kokako Competition 2011)

  8. Alan Summers Says:

    deep autumn
    all the tree tops
    full of sky

    Lovely and atmospheric poem, I love it.

    warm regards,


  9. Minecraft jugar Says:

    It really is a profound poem. I like to think and choose your words.

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