through eyes of rain leaf light


6 Responses

  1. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Lovely poem. Thank you.

  2. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    ah, yes, breath-catching. I would have prefered a coma after "run", but that's trivial.

  3. gregory longenecker Says:

    It's lovely picture in my mind. No ifs, ands or commas needed. Thank you Ann!

  4. haikuapprentice Says:

    What a delightful cacophony of sounds and images you have captured here, Ann. It precisely matches the feeling of looking upward in a rain shower, and rain falling into my eyes, mixing up everything.

    Very fresh poem! Thanks for sharing it.

    Strider

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    'eyes of rain' makes this for me!

    marion

  6. Kelli Says:

    I’m out of league here. Too much brain power on dilysap!

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