through eyes of rain leaf light
—Ann K. Schwader
Issue 14.1 | 5 June 2014
Lovely poem. Thank you.
ah, yes, breath-catching. I would have prefered a coma after "run", but that's trivial.
It's lovely picture in my mind. No ifs, ands or commas needed. Thank you Ann!
What a delightful cacophony of sounds and images you have captured here, Ann. It precisely matches the feeling of looking upward in a rain shower, and rain falling into my eyes, mixing up everything.
Very fresh poem! Thanks for sharing it.
Strider
'eyes of rain' makes this for me!
marion
I’m out of league here. Too much brain power on dilysap!
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June 5th, 2014 at 11:24 am
Lovely poem. Thank you.
June 5th, 2014 at 12:41 pm
ah, yes, breath-catching. I would have prefered a coma after "run", but that's trivial.
June 5th, 2014 at 12:48 pm
It's lovely picture in my mind. No ifs, ands or commas needed. Thank you Ann!
June 8th, 2014 at 11:10 pm
What a delightful cacophony of sounds and images you have captured here, Ann. It precisely matches the feeling of looking upward in a rain shower, and rain falling into my eyes, mixing up everything.
Very fresh poem! Thanks for sharing it.
Strider
June 24th, 2014 at 8:20 am
'eyes of rain' makes this for me!
marion
November 5th, 2016 at 5:45 am
I’m out of league here. Too much brain power on dilysap!