through eyes of rain leaf light
—Ann K. Schwader
Issue 14.1 | 5 June 2014
Lovely poem. Thank you.
ah, yes, breath-catching. I would have prefered a coma after "run", but that's trivial.
It's lovely picture in my mind. No ifs, ands or commas needed. Thank you Ann!
What a delightful cacophony of sounds and images you have captured here, Ann. It precisely matches the feeling of looking upward in a rain shower, and rain falling into my eyes, mixing up everything.
Very fresh poem! Thanks for sharing it.
'eyes of rain' makes this for me!
I’m out of league here. Too much brain power on dilysap!
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