through eyes of rain leaf light Published by Ann K. Schwader Ann K. Schwader's haiku have appeared in Modern Haiku, Frogpond, The Heron's Nest, bottle rockets, and elsewhere. View all posts by Ann K. Schwader
What a delightful cacophony of sounds and images you have captured here, Ann. It precisely matches the feeling of looking upward in a rain shower, and rain falling into my eyes, mixing up everything. Very fresh poem! Thanks for sharing it. Strider Reply
Lovely poem. Thank you.
ah, yes, breath-catching. I would have prefered a coma after "run", but that's trivial.
It's lovely picture in my mind. No ifs, ands or commas needed. Thank you Ann!
What a delightful cacophony of sounds and images you have captured here, Ann. It precisely matches the feeling of looking upward in a rain shower, and rain falling into my eyes, mixing up everything.
Very fresh poem! Thanks for sharing it.
Strider
'eyes of rain' makes this for me!
marion
I’m out of league here. Too much brain power on dilysap!
What imagination! Love it!