living
a shallow life
sunfish


4 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    __In reading this, Jeff, my imagination was spurred; nifty, that, the intent of haiku/senryu. _m

    rock bass
    this long night swim
    a red eye

  2. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Intriguing possibilities. I like the way these few words send my thoughts in different directions.

  3. Bruce Feingold Says:

    Intriguing and fun, all in a short pithy poem.

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I don't think we have sunfish here in Ireland, but I really like the lightness of this haiku.

    marion

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