snow
the city
in quiet chaos


7 Responses

  1. Lolly Says:

    Beautiful

  2. Lesley Says:

    Meik, just lovely.

  3. Padma Says:

    Nice!

  4. Valentina Says:

    This captures what it is like to be snowed in by a harsh storm when there is snow everywhere and the streets are empty.

  5. magyar Says:

    __ The memory of gazing outward through our darkened window; the snow flakes and people chaos. So well felt within your nifty verse, Meik_!

    snow flake
    as we light our candle
    one match

    _m

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    The narrator in this haiku seems quite happy to be taken away from the city's chaos. :)

    Living in a moderate climate (in the shelter of the Mourne Mountains on the east coast of Northern Ireland) it is hard to imagine being snowed in, as we rarely experience extremes in temperature.

    marion

  7. Alan Summers Says:

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    Wonderful haiku, the city reimagined with snow, and a little like Dr Zhivago and the Ice Palace.
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    snowing
    through the blizzard
    particles of me

    Alan Summers
    Winner, The Haiku Calendar Competition 2011 (Snapshot Press)
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