my cousin's granddaughters
     flirt with me
          at his funeral

—Ross Clark

About the author: Ross Clark
Brisbane, Australia
rclarkbard at yahoo dot com dot au

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Responses to the haiku for 11 October 2004 by Ross Clark

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-11 15:21:06
     

    yellow ...
    october leaves
    week old ducklings, in the lake

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-10-12 03:20:03
     

    granny funeral
    laughter of grandchildren
    fill the hall

  3.  
    martin
    2004-10-25 01:54:57
     

    clerk's funeral
    the tractor pushes dirt
    into the grave

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-13 22:31:48
     

    ten thousand mango blossoms
    so red --
    march winds await

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