squadrons of crows
returning from the fields
 - setting sun -

—Sue Schneider
        

About the author: Sue Schneider, native of Sacramento California
email address: rss at lanset.com

new to writing haiku but always an appreciative audience for the talents that contribute to tinywords. will continue to explore the language of poetry in my sixth decade of life.

Responses to the haiku for 13 October 2004 by Sue Schneider

  1.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-10-13 04:25:27
     

    sunset long
    drawn quack
    the duck calls out to a missing friend

  2.  
    kristine metzker
    2004-10-13 09:30:31
     

    crows roost at night
    downtown sacramento
    dirty windshield

  3.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-13 09:34:26
     

    before dawn-
    a family of geese
    greet the rowers

  4.  
    E. Hayden (siouxcharger at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-13 22:13:15
     

    City afternoon--
    Sparrows dropping excrement
    To stay aloft

  5.  
    bob ricardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-14 03:41:59
     

    bounce of
    the dead limb --
    lumbering flight of the raven

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  6.  
    martin
    2004-10-25 01:44:33
     

    circus clown
    a crow lands on the collapsed tent

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-13 08:27:40
     

    string of sea gulls
    meandering evening flight --
    city dump fades


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