red tail lights
I decide we're going
to eat take-out

—Deborah P. Kolodji
        

About the author: Deborah P. Kolodji
Pasadena, California
dkolodji at aol.com

Deborah P Kolodji is the President of the Science Fiction Poetry Association and the editor of Amaze: The Cinquain Journal.

Her work has appeared in many journals, both on and off the web. Unfinished Book, her chapbook of haiku, cinquains, and other short poems, was published by Shadows Ink Publications.

Responses to the haiku for 18 October 2004 by Deborah P. Kolodji

  1.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-18 09:32:06
     

    chinese takeout-
    one more
    stale fortune

  2.  
    Edmund Schwellenbach
    2004-10-18 11:55:09
     

    red tail lights ~
    unconcerned
    the crock pot waits

  3.  
    Edmund Schwellenbach
    2004-10-18 13:08:16
     

    red tail lights ~
    two rumps waiting
    one in the crock pot

  4.  
    john tiong chunghoo (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-10-19 00:37:26
     

    spanning the sky
    the huge
    national flag

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-10-19 08:22:27
     

    quietude, the dinner table --
    autumnal storm rages on

    -


    deb, been a while.

  6.  
    Stella Siador
    2004-10-19 13:18:43
     

    red tail lights
    stuck during rush hour--
    takeout's getting cold

  7.  
    martin
    2004-10-25 01:15:55
     

    autumn dusk
    a stop light above the flood

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-12 21:27:02
     

    thundercloud -
    i decide to go
    alone

    -

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