By the pasture fence 
snowflakes melt
in my lover's hand 

—James A. Westbrooks
        

About the author: I write things down as they occur to me. They work for me, if not always for others.

James A. Westbrooks
Spartanburg, SC

Responses to the haiku for 15 December 2004 by James A. Westbrooks

  1.  
    JOHN TIONG CHUNGHOO (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2004-12-15 02:43:46
     

    cross culture
    the child talks to the magpie
    chirping on the roof

  2.  
    ed markowski (1elmarko at comcast dot net)
    2004-12-15 05:41:57
     

    beautiful work.
    ed


    snowflakes
    how do they manage to fall
    without touching?

  3.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-12-15 08:34:59
     

    in the snow-
    sharing a melting
    ice cream cone

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-16 21:01:18
     

    cool water
    ripple through her fingers
    scent of pine needles

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