waning moon--
her half cup bra
slung over the chair

—Dru Philippou
        

About the author: Dru Philippou was raised in London, and now lives in Taos, New Mexico. Her haiku and longer poems have been published in several journals.

Responses to the haiku for 20 October 2005 by Dru Philippou

  1.  
    2005-10-20 13:18:17
     

    afshi i Jugës
    puth lulen
    çel nga dashuria... albania

    the southern fever
    kiss the flower
    it bloomes from love...

  2.  
    JJ
    2005-10-20 14:39:24
     

    shooting star--
    the young woman misses
    her left breast

    stjärnfall--
    den unga kvinnan saknar
    sitt vänstra bröst...Swedish

  3.  
    R.K.Singh
    2005-10-20 23:08:17
     

    the young maid
    giving her nightie
    another spin

    R.K.Singh

  4.  
    R.K.Singh
    2005-10-20 23:10:35
     

    He stands before
    the nude venus awaiting
    her gown to fall down

  5.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-10-20 23:19:24
     

    waning moon
    swims in misty cloud
    aimless i am

  6.  
    Vidur Jyoti
    2005-10-21 10:24:32
     

    waning moon
    concealed ripples
    invited stars

  7.  
    bobby michael richardson
    2005-10-22 04:57:46
     

    half cup bra
    strewn cross the floor...
    such fullness, waxing lust


    weaned of he mother's milk""--
    yet, i continually return to the source"

  8.  
    2005-10-22 12:46:49
     

    waning moon shimmers
    on the woman's naked skin:
    illumination

  9.  
    yee hop choi
    2005-10-22 14:56:58
     

    for some reason rear window comes to mind. i'm waiting for
    grace kelly & jimmy stewart to enter the scene. so
    hitchcockian, so very well done.


    half nu..?
    my neighbor draws
    her shade

    .

  10.  
    Judith Ingram
    2005-10-22 21:40:46
     

    Three women drinkin tea
    two and a half breasts
    between them

  11.  
    Rick Lewis
    2005-10-23 17:22:11
     

    rising sun
    her half cup bra
    joined by lace panties

  12.  
    Dudley de Souza
    2005-10-24 00:20:46
     

    Sadly, a shaft of morning light
    discovers her sheets still clean
    and - yes - still unruffled.

  13.  
    bobby michael richardson
    2006-02-21 16:55:58
     

    waxing moon
    in the still of the night--
    fullness of a milky white breast

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