midnight 
Dad's footstep 
as he goes to work

—Kurvin Bhujun
        

About the author: I am a student living in Mauritius. I've begun to write haiku at the end of last year. My hobbies include reading and writing haiku, reading books and collecting aphorisms.

Responses to the haiku for 13 October 2006 by Kurvin Bhujun

  1.  
    prado chekov
    2006-10-13 15:54:30
     

    kurvin,
    very solid debut! let's raise a glass
    to the salt of the earth!
    prado

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-10-13 20:59:22
     

    This has a quiet eloquence, Kurvin. Well done.

  3.  
    2006-10-14 06:56:32
     

    A good quiet haiku. I like the fact you said 'footstep' rather than 'footsteps'. I enjoy coming back to this haiku.

  4.  
    2006-10-14 08:39:51
     

    Seventeen syllables,
    well delivered,
    make a huge difference.

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-10-15 15:20:45
     

    crack of dawn-
    squeaky bed minutes before
    aroma of coffee

  6.  
    kurvin
    2006-10-21 02:56:06
     

    Thank you for all the comments. Most appreciated.
    Kurvin

  7.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-10-26 17:57:40
     

    autumn mist-
    up through the whiteness
    this black feathered scavenger

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