thirsty-
inside the pail of water
a frog

—Vishnu P Kapoor
        

About the author: I am a retired Indian Air Force officer. Earlier I taught English Literature. I write poetry in Urdu language. I am a practising Buddhist. Being a widower at 65 years of age, I live with my married son and spinster daughter.

contact: vpk151042 at yahoo dot co dot in

Responses to the haiku for 18 December 2006 by Vishnu P Kapoor

  1.  
    Anthony slauson (tonyslauson at hotmail dot com)
    2006-11-16 05:14:20
     

    PERFECT!

  2.  
    Vasile Moldovan
    2006-12-18 09:59:03
     

    A frog forgeting
    both hunger and thirst...
    the love calling

  3.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2006-12-18 10:51:02
     

    perfect...

  4.  
    kala ramesh
    2006-12-18 11:03:07
     

    Ha! Vishnu

    You dared to play with frog and water and managed to get away with it!!!
    One more perfect score!
    - kala

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-12-18 14:28:57
     

    thirst-
    even in the empty pail
    this frog

    -

    just a thought

  6.  
    Alan Summers
    2006-12-19 09:17:58
     

    Love it. It reminds me of the Queensland frogs that kept popping out from our pipework and into our Queenslander house!

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