first snowfall - 
a city-full 
of student drivers

—David Giacalone
        

About the author: A former lawyer-mediator, David has been a Haiku Advocate at his popular weblog f/k/a since 2004, mixing "breathless" punditry aimed mostly at legal professionals with one-breath poetry by Honored Guest haijin. His own haiku and senryu can be found at f/k/a, in many journals, and at his dagosan's haiku diary. He lives along the Mohawk River in Schenectady, NY.

email contact: dgiacalone at nycap.rr.com

Responses to the haiku for 23 November 2007 by David Giacalone

  1.  
    2007-11-23 00:30:14
     

    :) nicely written about headache for insurance companies.

  2.  
    Aurora
    2007-11-23 10:27:50
     

    Bwahahaha! Good one.

  3.  
    mike farley
    2007-11-24 13:07:32
     

    blowing snow . . .
    a Volvo broadsides
    the ski parking tram

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-11-24 21:41:59
     

    first star--
    the first chirp
    by the first cricket

  5.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-11-26 07:49:13
     

    And, I'm told, no two of them are alike.

  6.  
    laryalee
    2007-11-28 17:54:45
     

    Hi David!
    This view brings a chuckle....it depends where you
    live of course...in our area, we're all used to the
    snow -- and prepared for it!
    But on newscasts I see folks in more southern climes
    skidding all over the roads...
    ;)
    Lary
    P.S. Bill's comment is priceless!

  7.  
    2007-11-28 18:03:40
     

    Hi, Lary. You must have smarter folks living in your region. Here, around Albany, NY, we average over 60 inches of snow a year, but the first couple times we get winter precipitation you'd think the locals had never seen the stuff before.

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