however, (my pet word), someone reminded me of something; lately, even i had failed to observe, from time to time.
indefinite articles and definite article, usually i am not particular about such issues, though now, it has been positioned uppermost in my cranium, almost akin to someone telling you not to think of something, and you find yourself doing the opposite, and that is all you can think of.
so cold
two dogs and a cat, together…
at a fire
i like the “at” on the third line, to me it gives tremendous emphasis on (how cold)
after i finish here, i will go in search of more pieces arising from you.
lovely haiku, wish I could do one
Great Haiku, gave ame great inspration to wrtie Haikus!!!!!
i love a good pun, amanda.
however, (my pet word), someone reminded me of something; lately, even i had failed to observe, from time to time.
indefinite articles and definite article, usually i am not particular about such issues, though now, it has been positioned uppermost in my cranium, almost akin to someone telling you not to think of something, and you find yourself doing the opposite, and that is all you can think of.
so cold
two dogs and a cat, together…
at a fire
i like the “at” on the third line, to me it gives tremendous emphasis on (how cold)
after i finish here, i will go in search of more pieces arising from you.
thanks for sharing
orgbob
bless his heart;
cyber graffiti
Who knew?
“amanda”
amanda
here i lurk
to think …
you read my work
amanda
stray from the beaten path
even now …
you bare a laugh
amanda
from what we learn
is it of concern …
now it’s your turn
tokyo winter apartment
warming up my feet
in a cold blanket
nose dripping –
brisk winds
chill the campfire
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wondering how amanda is doing these days …
At the fire side
two dogs seepling a dogsleep
and a cat purring
rainy autumn night –
full bloom bougainvilleas
some red, some purple
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