extremely wordy, superfluous, (verbose);
here’s a possible remake, not to say it should be made over this way, simply my thoughts on how effective it could have been.
rain-
old red barn
uncovered openings
at times, you can be overly descriptive, informative, or simply wordy.
extremely wordy, superfluous, (verbose);
here’s a possible remake, not to say it should be made over this way, simply my thoughts on how effective it could have been.
rain-
old red barn
uncovered openings
at times, you can be overly descriptive, informative, or simply wordy.
It is rain…it’s rain –
within the old red barn
a new grey pond
seeds in winter
on the ground —
abandon barn doors