This is one of my favourite haiku on the tinywords site. The image of the last of the snow preserved liked a gift is so vivid and fresh. I’d even say that the world is a slightly better place with this haiku in it!
“weekends…
come monday, new haiku…
today, read anew”
edmund, i am to be in agreement with the imagery drawn from cindy’s piece.
however, being in agreement with one out of three of your statements sounds like a winner to me.
i was captivated, until this little light went “off” in my head.
there, i stood in the darkness.
upon recalling, seasons go accordingly, spring, summer, fall, then winter.
then, my mind, within it’s self, began to argue the point.
case in point:
spring chill…
last of the snow curled up…
in maple leaf
also there’s a key word, “last”.
sure, you may argue, there is to be an early snow fall in the latter part of the season called autumn, before winter’s relief comes to re-inforce; in addition to leaves being similar during early spring or late autumn.
feasibly, more readers would possibly intertwine with spring in mind.
oh well, this being the weekend, i am set upon by previously unread haiku…
This is one of my favourite haiku on the tinywords site. The image of the last of the snow preserved liked a gift is so vivid and fresh. I’d even say that the world is a slightly better place with this haiku in it!
“weekends…
come monday, new haiku…
today, read anew”
edmund, i am to be in agreement with the imagery drawn from cindy’s piece.
however, being in agreement with one out of three of your statements sounds like a winner to me.
i was captivated, until this little light went “off” in my head.
there, i stood in the darkness.
upon recalling, seasons go accordingly, spring, summer, fall, then winter.
then, my mind, within it’s self, began to argue the point.
case in point:
spring chill…
last of the snow curled up…
in maple leaf
also there’s a key word, “last”.
sure, you may argue, there is to be an early snow fall in the latter part of the season called autumn, before winter’s relief comes to re-inforce; in addition to leaves being similar during early spring or late autumn.
feasibly, more readers would possibly intertwine with spring in mind.
oh well, this being the weekend, i am set upon by previously unread haiku…
1000, ugh