a driving wind– the stop signs all flattened Published by J. D. Heskin J.D. Heskin Duluth, MN Blueforks at aol.com View all posts by J. D. Heskin
i can see the humor in j.d.’s words a “driving” wind– followed by “the stop signs” even “all flattened”, i could perceive. “however”, the feeling left within me was this was more than a moment. hmmm, what about: driving wind— stop signs give way flattened less at times, best… Reply
Very nice, the ‘driving’wind, the ‘stop signs’flattened. Beautifully contrasted.
i can see the humor in j.d.’s words
a “driving” wind–
followed by “the stop signs”
even “all flattened”, i could perceive.
“however”, the feeling left within me was this was more than a moment.
hmmm, what about:
driving wind—
stop signs give way
flattened
less at times, best…
heavy rain
the kitten
between cat’s forelegs
blistering sun –
the umbrella’s leaves
remain green
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