K. Ramesh, aniram86 at rediffmail.com
I write haiku, tanka and free verse. My works have appeared in magazines and anthologies published in India and abroad. I work as a teacher in a J Krishnamurti School in Chennai, India.
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I love this haiku. The visual image is so vivid, and it brings back to life the childhood experience of wonder venturing into the sea.
however, one word caused me to ponder what the author had “in” mind.
was the word “in” used to represent the individual actually being in the water, if so, are we trying to say too much, while not giving thought to the natural order of things…
I love this haiku. The visual image is so vivid, and it brings back to life the childhood experience of wonder venturing into the sea.
amusing, but these things do happen.
however, one word caused me to ponder what the author had “in” mind.
was the word “in” used to represent the individual actually being in the water, if so, are we trying to say too much, while not giving thought to the natural order of things…
Its a very nice Haiku. So vivid.
A wonderful juxtaposition! The fishes’ bites add a unique “feel” to an ordinary sunrise. Very original and enjoyable
last breath
pet dog moves
its paw to me
humid morning,
the blue jay’s wings …
cool me down
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A morning driving
on a highway,
hands still at steering
Eyes stationed at huge Orange ball !!
cold darkness
through the blinds–
this rooster yet crows