Allen McGill
Allen McGill
San Miguel de Allende, Mexico
aljons at yahoo.com
Originally from NYC, Allen lives, writes, acts and directs theatre in Mexico. His published fiction, non-fiction, poetry, plays, etc., have appeared in print as well as on line: NY Times, The Writer, Newsday, Retrozine, Laughter Loaf, Flashquake, Herons Nest, Cenotaph, TempsLibres, Autumn Leaves, Poetic Voices,Amaze-Cinquain, Bottle Rocket, Frogpond, Modern Haiku, World Haiku Review, many others.
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in keeping with david woody’s assumption, i must stay on track, commentaries to make…
i’ll keep this one brief; the above is a sentence, though it could have read, “the crane highsteps carefully through, in, around, the shaded marsh; with no juxtapose, being continuous, with no break in action, nor is a haiku.
akin more to an explanation…
almost forgot, “in my opinion”
nude beach bath house…
to my
down sandals
in a private stall
raised drain walls
a crane trails
above the water
drips of nectar
from the umbrella tree blossoms —
bee’s ecstatic flight
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allen,
wanted to say happy thanksgiving, & i can’t
email from work.
ed
thansgiving alone
i order two
with anchovies
closer review —
crane’s path through the lily pads
spies the dragon fly
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