morning moon the nooks and crannies of an english muffin Published by Ed Markowski Ed Markowski writes and paints in America's Great Lakes Region. View all posts by Ed Markowski
Filling all the nooks and cranies of even a fermented mind: Being an old poet, I like show, over tell, even though haiku editors do not seem to have a problem with tell? Nice image Ed. Sincerely, Gene Reply
looking upon the purple flowers – remembered by my mind’s eye – when words are employed, showing equates to telling a pointed finger, decisively different; though some still can’t understand – Reply
“maybe” says it all “possibly”, no alluding to the impossible. sorry you felt my response was a rebuttal to yours, gene, however your words brought to mind the ongoing discussion of “show” rather than tell “maybe” – Reply
eerie stab wounds
the cracks and crannies
of a hive
What a great visual. Good job!!
vibrant abstract painting
– small pools of red
on top of orange baubles
It’s the english muffin—-never will breakfast be without a smile and a moon thought. Thanks.
Filling all the nooks and cranies of even a fermented mind:
Being an old poet, I like show, over tell, even
though haiku editors do not seem to have a problem
with tell?
Nice image Ed.
Sincerely,
Gene
looking upon
the purple flowers –
remembered by my mind’s eye
–
when words are employed, showing equates to telling
a pointed finger, decisively different; though some still can’t understand
–
Maybe Bob.
Later, am to busy for this at the momment.
Gene
“maybe” says it all
“possibly”, no alluding to the impossible.
sorry you felt my response was a rebuttal to yours, gene, however your words brought to mind the ongoing discussion of “show” rather than tell
“maybe”
–
a delicious juxtaposition in this tasty poem; nicely done.
butter melting
morning sun overtakes moon
hot muffin soothes
morning, knee-deep rain
covering the grass …
branches from yesterday’s tree