Original – but static. I believe that a haiku is an experience responded to at a particular moment in time having resonances to spirituality or nature in the broadest sense.There are so many powerful haiku which express more than static pictures.
Original. I believe that a haiku is an experience responded to at a particular moment in time having resonances to spirituality or nature in the broadest sense.
Great holliday…
yet the same tatte- red scarecrow
in the clean orchard
passed on–
his image lives
in the scarecrow
Classic clothes
for others now–
in the city she loved
roadwork
an unearthed doll
points towards sky
as someone with 3 sisters, this gave me a nice chuckle. thanks for sharing it.
Original – but static. I believe that a haiku is an experience responded to at a particular moment in time having resonances to spirituality or nature in the broadest sense.There are so many powerful haiku which express more than static pictures.
Original. I believe that a haiku is an experience responded to at a particular moment in time having resonances to spirituality or nature in the broadest sense.
Well done, Cindy!
A well executed SENRYU.
About 60 miles north of Detroit
on U.S. 24,
country abbey
a scarecrow’s shadow
reaches the crucifix
i found myself chuckling …
however at paul and norman’s responses.
“original”
i ponder their being of the same school.
the rooster crows
again and again …
spring day, well underway
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