paul m. is an award winning haiku poet whose work has been widely published. He is Treasurer for the Haiku Society of America (hsa-haiku.org) and Haiku North America (haikunorthamerica.com), as well as book review editor for Modern Haiku (modernhaiku.org).
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yard of weeds
newborn insects scatter
as mower invades
yard of weeds
newborn insects scatter
as mower invades
Paul, just about as good as a haiku can be!
Nice one, Paul. I can just see it. I hope you’re doing well in Rhode Island. Adjust to that humidity yet? :).
I experienced a visceral cooling as I read, and continue to appreciate this haiku.
Excellent comparison. Thank you.
i ponder which of “viscera” meanings for dan’s usage …
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summer breeze ~
that heady feeling
as she walks by
Neighbourhood –
so many fresh weeds and wild flowers
among the scrap irons
medan tour
dried frogs
blown for sale
medan in sumatra
fall’s
in the air …
the dandelion rides
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