Troy–
The use of color words give your haiku poems brightness and the line willed the red light green”” is perfection, makes me feel the moment. Your words have taken lessons from what your photographer’s eyes see.
Many thanks,
Erin”
[…] The receipt of the following haiku was sufficiently serendipitous, satisfying and apt that I want to share it. a blonde girl, wearing a pink skirt, on a blue bike, willed the red light green […]
Troy–
The use of color words give your haiku poems brightness and the line willed the red light green”” is perfection, makes me feel the moment. Your words have taken lessons from what your photographer’s eyes see.
Many thanks,
Erin”
blonde biker
tatoos and piercings
prayer flag streamers
red she stops
green he moves
she stays
roadhouse neon
tintinting her peroxide blonde wig…
the northern lights
strange, i’m reminded of elizabeth barrett browning’s he sea-mew””
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thoughts of late,
things i should have been —
the sea-mew
should have been a fish”
[…] The receipt of the following haiku was sufficiently serendipitous, satisfying and apt that I want to share it. a blonde girl, wearing a pink skirt, on a blue bike, willed the red light green […]
Inebriated by colours…
On the old-fashioned street,
the astounding youth
spring
in the breeze a branch of roses
goes up and down
Yesterday The wind blows Now the sky dances
Three red nights Four blue days When will I see a rainbow
sorry hangingtogether.org,
not better than a red wheelbarrow!
Dear Troy
I found this haiku of yours through tinywords.com
I just love it because I love colours.
Keep on creating more colour-haiku.
Vineta
dancing gently
on top of the world
amazing colours
flash of yellow lightning
cross my path…
this bat out of hell cat