dusk she counts the cars with one headlight Published by Kurvin Bhujun I am a student living in Mauritius. I've begun to write haiku at the end of last year. My hobbies include reading and writing haiku, reading books and collecting aphorisms. View all posts by Kurvin Bhujun
Dear Kurvin, Here is an aphorism for you. “A singing teakettle is not happy!” Keep writing, Marylin Barr Reply
Kurvin, I read your haiku as poignant & the “she” as feeling threatened. Nice work, & yes, keep writing. Reply
la rochefoucauld “absence extinguishes small passions and increases great ones, as the wind blows out a candle, and fans a bonfire.” — kurvin, my 21st words- raindrops, mother earth’s tears; she senses what is to be in the end — issa- “lying spread-eagle so cool so lonely” — geese in flight- season ending or season beginning Reply
Sweet!
-kala
Different, and original. I do like counting stars haiku and this is very good, thank you!
Dear Kurvin, Here is an aphorism for you. “A singing teakettle is not happy!” Keep writing, Marylin Barr
Kurvin, I read your haiku as poignant & the “she” as feeling threatened. Nice work, & yes, keep writing.
la rochefoucauld
“absence extinguishes small passions and increases great ones, as the wind blows out a candle, and fans a bonfire.”
—
kurvin,
my 21st words-
raindrops, mother earth’s tears; she senses what is to be in the end
—
issa-
“lying spread-eagle
so cool
so lonely”
—
geese in flight-
season ending or
season beginning
silence
in the dark–
yes!!! harvest moon, i see you