Dawn Bruce, somersetpoets at ozemail.com.au
Dawn Bruce is a widely published Australian poet, winner of numerous free verse and haiku awards. Dawn was the coordinator of Somerset Poets for five years and is now leader of two creative writing groups in Sydney. Her second book, 'Tangible Shadows', will be published late 2005.
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Haiku with bite and allusion! ;-)
“…Peter Pan: a story told to kids, a story remembered by adults for the rest of their lives…” A true sentence.
And a good haiku!
Love this one – Peter Pan, who would never grow up, is now gray.
rat race-
amidst ragweeds
tiniest yellow flower
Lovely, Dawn. The contrast of youth and age is shown so well.
Susan
Haunting, Dawn.
I enjoyed this, Dawn!
brocaded carp–
koi pond of many jewels
reflects the starry sky