autumn rain –
a tattooed man sells
permanent markers
Published by
Israel López Balan
I'm a mexican buddhist with a jewish name and mayan-spanish last names, who writes japanese haiku in english... What a cocktailized world!
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Brilliant, Israel.
raindrops
a bag lady nods
to the beggar
“tattooed” and then “permanent” (!) “markers”
i like your haiku-idea very much!
and i stare on these tattoos, see this rain and…
a great combination!
Israel, que sorpresa verte de nuevo por aquí.
Un gran haiku. Enhorabuena!
Enjoyed reading and visualizing it!
Thanks.
-kala
Great poem, Israel. And I love your multinational cocktailism!
Judith
Very original, and bags of layers to this haiku. I’ll enjoy coming back, again and again.
sorry for my bad English…
to stare at s.th.
sometimes i forget the right words…
angelika, don’t fret; too often, many versed in english remember all the wrong words
–
autumn sunrise
in the keys–
it rains here, too