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dr ifts
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the split
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dustin neal
he's a student of haiku; reading, writing, teaching and sharing haiku is a part of his daily life. he has been published in various established journals across the world and the net. dustin is also the editor of clouds peak.
contact: haikudustin at gmail dot com
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Dear Dustin,
Brilliant!
kala
that`s great!
Dustin, I’m usually a crab when it comes to “typographical tomfoolery,” but this one has won me over completely.
Very nice. I echo Kala — brilliant!
A neat example of the message and the form adding meaning to each other. Well done, Dustin.
Susan
Dustin . . . I’m just so jealous that I didn’t think of it first! It’s terrific! Judith
“”slith”__”ering”
“”cro”__”ss”
“t”__”he”
“”gr”__”ound”
“thr”__”ough”
“a”__”sea”
“”of”__”green”
“””runa”__”way”
“”kite”__”string””